Learning how to write correct sentences

WALT That  -  correct sentences have special parts.

We looked at a picture of a boy flying on a book and then we had to write a story about it. We got to make to story up using whatever we wanted.

I Liked that we wrote correct sentences in my story.

Next time we want to make our writing more interesting by using WOW words.

Do you like our story?

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WALT- make shapes and make speech bubble.

I like that it is colourful and I like that their is 2 animals. I wish that there was more animals.
 Do you like my work that i have done???