WALTThat - correct sentences have special parts. We looked at a picture of a boy flying on a book and then we had to write a story about it. We got to make to story up using whatever we wanted.
I Liked that we wrote correct sentences in my story. Next time we want to make our writing more interesting by usingWOW words.
Me and Niko went down to the creek on our farm and when we got down there, first we put our lines in and then we waited.for a eel to came and eat our bait then Niko got one of the lines and then we had to wait for the red one to get a eel and finally the red one had a eel on it.then Niko got the red line and he wined up and we only got one eel and my dad was smoking the eel and then we ate the smoked eel and it was yum.